[Espy]

I hope you don't mid me tearing apart stuff >__<

-takes a deep breath-

1.) Top of her head. It's too flat. Maybe a bit more curved?
2.) Pupils...have gotta stay in the middle of the irises. The irises are the ones doing the moving.
3.) The upper arms should be a tiny bit longer.
4.) Lips. They...should be bigger. Lots bigger.
5.) The chest...is really awkward. First of all, the bare part shouldn't be so pronounced. Second...actually lemme just draw a ref.