[littl3chocobo]

something was off, the reader was distracted by something and it could feel the ties pulling the reader from it. tightening it's grip on the reader's mind it tried to keep the story

robin landed harshly on the floor at the feet of a field mouse leaving the poor thing startled. wildly the poor creature began shrieking about intruders and tiny humans and flipping her skirts every which way and trying futilely to find a place to hide and when no harm came from the strange human creature her shrieks soon turned to worry that it was hurt