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Yume Journal
English III
1-13-2012 Yume This poem was for an assignment I've done. Independent Mother Anne Why myself Is full of shame Full of hate from the community Living In pain and sorrow like the cries of the rain Raising eight beautiful children It’s a sin to me, as it’s a blessing Oh dear, where’s the father when I need Dose he not care? For the sake of my children’s life I shall nurst them to grow As I continue my fate Till the day I die When I go I will be free at last Free, Free from my sins |
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1-14-2012 Yume This was something I just remembered when I had bad luck. (This Isn't a poem) Remembering :My Bad Luck I remember one time In my life I had bad luck. It was at home when my mom had this nice glass cup. My hand slip and dropped by accident. My mom was a little upset, but It was okay. She bought another one and that too broke by me. I was thinking how did I break another glass again? I was reaching In the refrigerator being careful and It broke. Last time I was either going to get the next glass from the washed dishes or the cabinet and that broke as well...I now thought I had bad luck. Eventually the accidents had ended. |
I find your poetry curious to read, but it looks like you need to improve your grammar and spelling. They are a bit awkward to read through, even if that's intentional for the style.
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First one Is a poem and the second one Isn't, I just had a moment of remembering something. I'm not good at poetry at all... Its just a journal of random stuff.. http://i889.photobucket.com/albums/a...h4p_panda3.gif |
Okay, but you still have some errors here and there. "Nurst" should be "nursed" for instance. :)
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Oh okay I think I copied that word from a poem and thats how It was spelled.
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Ah. Entirely possible. I've looked at enough older poems to see that enough.
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1-16-2012 Yume This Is just a reminder. Reminder *I must ask mom to find a way to send my hand drawn work to my Geometry Flvs teacher. *Call my English Flvs teacher for dba. *Think of ideas for my random manga ideas. *Next Trisphee quest save up for braens bundle and meesh top and bottom.Also Heavens monarch. |
1-23-2012
Yume New Diary dear diary there's lots of things going on and I can't wait for the good things to happen..My auntie Is moving back In her old house which we were currently living In. Now we going to move In my dads apartment. I was always tired of this place because of rats and bugs.... I will miss the dog park here and my dog son grave In the backyard. Oh yeah I almost forgot about the orange tree! I'm really glad my dad Is getting better he has a medical problem I would go Into detail,but just ask me. Its good he's better now, he lost some weight since he went to the hospital. My dad lost one job because of whet he been through so I hope he gets back on his feet. Anyways enough for the ramble.I just realize Its Monday...I need to do last week work.. |
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