Village of forgotten souls
 

The story line will progress as the rp goes on. Please give everyone resonable time to reply. I may put a limit on how many people can join the rp depending on how many actually want to do this rp and join. Ill be going on a point system and rewarding experience for certain things such as kills, useing skills, succesfull mission completion, etc.
The story so far:
Somewhere in the heart of Grillok lies a village surrounded by the dreaded forest. The village has been forgotten and many people who need a place to hide or have been cast out from their original villages and towns can come and have a peacful time. This all changed when the shadowlings appeared. A group of assins trying to rule the world. The village now haveing the last of the heros (Or villans) in the world has been sought out by the most powerful of the kings that rule Grillok. Who will rise to the challenge and become the hero.
Charachter sheet.
Name:
Age:
Race:
Class:
Sex:
History:
Clan:
Guild:
Occupation:
Desription:
Weapons:(Primary) (Secondary)
Powers: (1-3)More as you progress through the story.

Hm, Well you told me to look and give my opinion so let me start..(please do not take offence I'm giving my honest and blunt opinion)

First of all Your explanation of the RP, Is very little detailed.
Your plot is a bit dry. Why do the assassin's want to rule the world? What do the clans/guilds have to do with the story? What kind of powers are in the story? What time line? What races are in your story? Um.. Im sure if i gave it more thought I could think of more.. I'm going to link you to one of my more thought out rps for an example..

Alright well thats what this is for so i can list everything and let everyone know everything. I planned on working more of it out and i dont wanna say why the assasins want to rule the world becuase that was part of the story to be a surprise.

Click here.

that ought to give you an idea of things haha

How do you make spoilers?

Oh, well the code is [spoil ](text here [/spoil ] Withouth the spaces ofcourse

Alright i made a character if thats ok

Ya thats fine, Just know that no one liners are allowed :P

lol i can do more then one liners i just dont usually try lol

Alright, Im just letting you know ^^..

Alright. Hey wanna help me makeing this one? Like all the classes and races and stuff.

I will tomorrow right now i just wanna post :P

Alright lol.

Careful with the one word posts, they are no nos..

Uh pardon me for interrupting but

one natsu one liners are allowed, its Baby's thread, so unless they make a rule that says people have to post at least a paragraph I think its fine. second I understand the plot. It is generic enough to gain interest yet it has conflict and a basic struggle so it has room to grow.

XD that being said when you rather if you, make the thread I will sign up.

Pogs, I was refering to my rp ;P Chris.. I mean.. Baby new what i was talking about :P