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Aelir 09-12-2010 09:27 PM

Because I can {tris edits}
 
Some edits and sketches I did. o 3o

Critiques are welcome.


Newest(top) - Oldest(bottom)


Some random outfit inspired by some random flower.
/cant remember
/still a wip
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k9...ls/flower1.pnghttp://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k9...ls/effin-1.png



A I seemed to have been on a genie spree one night...
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k9...enie2detal.pnghttp://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k9...els/genie2.png



Some random space suit I was working on...
I only really like the arms...and the shoes...a little bit.
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k9...ticwhaaa-2.png


A sword I gave up on...
the hair gave me the rage.
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k9...atanaeffin.png

Panda 09-12-2010 10:33 PM


Lucid: 09-12-2010 10:36 PM

oh my goodness, these look fantastic! I want them to be real items. right now. ô3ô

GrnTea 09-12-2010 10:55 PM

Sword. Want. Now! :eek:
They're all really really good though :)

Aelir 09-12-2010 11:14 PM

Thanks guys. =3
I'm surprised people like the sword. xD
Hair hates me.


I do have more, this is just what I have pixeled atm. o 3o

Fenris 09-12-2010 11:19 PM

Your pixeling is definitely a good start. Though the main things I see that need work are your folds. You have a good bases for them but they need to be more more prominent in some places and more of them in others. The other thing I see is on the sword I realize the shine and what not is harder to give the appearance of metal but it needs to be a bit smoother to match the actual style we use. As well on the sword when you were blending the tassel part. You would have to fix some of the outline. Definitely a very good start and holds many possibilities.

Fenris 09-12-2010 11:21 PM

Oh in addition the arm piece of the flower inspired set matches almost perfect with the style.

Aelir 09-12-2010 11:31 PM

Thanks Fen. =3

After the Genie outfit I saw my folds failed and needed to work on it. So I've been lurking on Tris for examples.
The Flower shading is redone. I previously shaded it and it didn't look right, so I looked around and fixed it to match better.
I notice I blend too much and I'm trying to catch myself. orz

my mantra has literally become 'theresnorushtheresnorush'

The sword isn't tool'd, so thats probably why it looks bright and odd. orz
It gave me so much hassle so I gave up and started to practice tool. o wo

Sadrain 09-12-2010 11:53 PM

Wow, those are beautiful. C: Good job. ^^

Guinevere 09-13-2010 12:08 AM

I love your designs, those are really neat. ;o

Letum-Adveho 09-13-2010 05:25 AM

These are all really good. I cant wait to see your first design after the flower in full effect! ^_^ It'll be sweet! I wish I had one already! Maybe in a cherry blossom type color?

Kyp 09-14-2010 12:40 PM

I love these designs! Amazing work!

Macabre 09-15-2010 05:01 PM

Those are really nice. ' A'


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