projectAVIAEN: a webcomic
 

i tried a fancomic once but it only made 5 pages XD

better than the fancomic attempts I had. :b
was planning this one but it sort of.. just died.

pffft XD dude i should have done about 50

Dude, your avatar is epic on here!
*Waves*
Thanks for the heads up on this place.. ;-;
Your art is always so gorgeous masa.
I envy you on so many levels.
You have a brilliant affect.
I will read your comic tomorrow after work and give you feedback on the story if you like 100000/10 for artwork. *Drools*

thanks. :> ~

there isn't much to the plot yet, since it's just the prologue, but feedback would be appreciated ~

/ming
Updated-

whoop didn't see this one here

I'm excited for the rest 8DDDD

that title page was such a tease, though.

5ever teasing HOHOHOH-

yeppppp /glare

every time I see that title page now, though
I think of that head swap
and die.

JKJLGJ-

I should
do a coloured headswap
CRIES

loooool o m f g

you should really make a page to post all the sillies.

I should. hahaha. biido cat.

especially biido cat.

i mean, biido + cats

lol
ghjkhlgk
i should get on that-

i know LOL

and yes. go. well, after you finish your schoolwork.

yep, aka tomorrow. LOL-

I'm cooking now, i'm hungry orz

yes~

ooh, what are you making?

just come congee. |D we're out of cooked rice.

aha |D was it good?

the only advice I can give you is that even the best art can not save you if you have a bad story. Its kinda the skeleton that brings the art to life. So make sure you have alot of things worked out and flushed.

yup, I also need to work on the scripting and pacing. |D;;
making people help me with that lolol. other details I have planned but it'll be a good while before I'm even able to execute them.


congee is average, takikikiki. b:

My only other thing is that even pages with just two people talking need a little dynamism. I would trying playing around with face shots next time you have pages of just too people talking, perhaps a close up of the main characters expression or something.

yep, trying that for later pages. these recent ones have actually been sitting on my comp for a few months now. OTL

XD haha So I just realized I watched your blog.
So what is the over all arching idea of your comic?

orly? 8D


It's... well, there's two sides of the story, one half following yomi and what he does with EON and the other following biido on his search for his verinum. They'll cross eventuallyyyy- at like, the end of arc 2 LOL. can't give away much more than that right now. b:

Yeah I started watching your blog when I first joined tris about two years ago.

Hmmm and who are these people?

hohoho glad to hear. 8)

biido and yomi. biido's not officially introduced until chapter 2 which will take 5ever ~~~

/cries

XD ah it makes a bit more sense when I read the prologue. I thought it just started from chapter one. And yeah the pacing is a bit off.

chapter 1 is pretty slow, chapter 2 will probably be kind of slow too, but it'll pick up from there.

this one-page-at-a-time deal isn't working wonders for the pacing either rofllll. it's supposed to be consumed a chapter at a time. "orz

Even though its a page at a time have you thought about doing over all thumbnails for an entire chapter?

all the pages for chapter 1 are sketched/storyboarded, but I have to make a few adjustments to the coming pages. andddd yeah. I intend to sketch each chapter out before actually drawing them. "orz

but hey, so are you. :b

& I was on here before LS LOL.

I just came over because of a friend. C> *wiggles*

I always thought you were like a really dedicated user of solia and never went anywhere else. XD

wellllllll I'm banned from there now. :V
and I did come here during its events lololol.

updated just now. /o/

this thread is old enough to witness version 1, my long artblock/hiatus and now the return

redrew this in 2017 and posted it in 2019 and now i'm working on redoing ch1 in 2020. damn.

https://tapas.io/series/project-AVIAEN

oooo wow you've come a long way since then!

i sure have, haha
it's been a wild ride leading up to now