DarkForbidden-Love's Art Center
 

Hello and welcome to my art center. This is an almost give away to help my abysmal drawing skills.

Rather simple in theory you post and talk to me, I decide weather or not I like you avi/suggest oc. If I do like it you will recieve art free of charge. Comment/ critiques are welcomed and encouraged.

Rules: Abide by them or no art for you

1) Follow Trisphee Rules of Conduct
2) Be kind to fellow thread goers
3) No chat speak
4) No begging


Nice and simple for all those who listen~

My wonderfull White List:
Espy
Littl3Chocobo
Angel Love Love

Black List(Those who have broken the rules)

Now we have samples. Please note these already belong to someone do not steal!


< favorite of mine, Digital Mash Up. This can only be done when I have seen and collected many of your avatars and will only be done once for each Person.


< Waist up, hand drawn. These will be most common as they are what I need to work on. :D


< Avatar 'stories'. Least common so you know if you get one you're very lucky. The first one is a simple pun on the avatar name while the second one is a in depth sinopis of the character the avatar appears to portray.


These are a tricky piece of work and can be made for any moderator/coder/worker on Tris. Please, get their permission before asking me to make these for you.


You may request Ocs or what not for me to draw/play with digitally but I do not do couples except for Trisphee avatar Digital pictures.

Special Contests~

The winners will recieve a special 'treat' for winning in the form of one item of their choice and/or a request of aurum.

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And if my mule account appears quoting her will give you 2500 arum.

Keeping for later use...

And now it is open~

Wait, if this is a freebie-ish place, I think it goes in Art Discussion and not here...

@Angel, I'm doing fineish. What about yourself?

@Espy, Really? I was kind of assuming since I was asking for art to be given to me to do it would go under requests. *Sweat drop* Anyway I could change it?

Awesome, wish I could say the same but my inspiration had been...lagging for lack of better words. That is why I opened this place. :D

Sure, we'll see what I can do with it. :D

Ara, you're asking for art to be given? Then I read your intro posts wrong, apologies...

Haha, you did not read it wrong, I'm looking for people to give me work. I want to draw/create something but I am unable to think of anything right now. It is free cause I'm still working on my style and I don't think anyone would bother to buy it if I did put a pricetag on it.

-points out that art requests are for if the poster has an OC/avi he/she wants drawn-

Ok, I'm now confused.

Then I made a mistake, Espy. And sorry for your confusing but all this thread is for is asking for people to take to me/ give me requests so that I'll get inspiration and draw them something.

And do you know if I could simply ask for the whole thread to be moved?

Okies. You've nice art, by the way.

Thanks, Espy. If you want I can draw you something right now.

@Angel, I'll see what I can do.

Nah, it's fine. And sorry if I sound a bit irked; got pissed off by some douchebags.

They remind me of fly paper actually. :o

@Espy, I didn't notice. But you could probably yell at me right now and I wouldn't notice. I'm half out of it. :D

They are certainly very intresting from what I have found about them. I have already got two of five done, expect them soon. :D

Well, I hope you like. The words where added by me cause I thought they fitted. :)

You're welcome. :D If you wait a little bit I can even have it digitally colored for you. Would you like that?

I'll get right to work on it then. It will take a while longer then drawing it but it still should be done rather quickly.

Hey, Dark, do you have any more of those hand-drawns that you wouldn't mind some critique on?

In right now? Only a few. I have my hand, the one on the front page, and another. I can get more in a few minutes, why?

Nah, nothing. Was wondering if I should critique.

I actually have on I'm doing for Miz would you like to critque that for me?

I'll see to the sample you already have, first.

-would redline if tablet was usable, but it isn't-

Great, now let me find my pic so I can edit it with your suggestions.

this one.

Sorry if I'm harsh with my critiques >__<

1.) The neck has to be thicker. I draw necks roughly the width of real-life, but my style is more realistic. Yours isn't, but the neck should still span from the middle of one eye to the middle of the other.

2.) Shoulders should be slanted down a bit more. Hers go our almost horizontally; lower then a few degrees (they seem really stiff right now).

3.) The torso is way too skinny. At the very least, the body should be as wide as the head (even then, it'd still be thin, even in terms of manga).

4.) Hips should be around the width of the shoulders. This might be a bit difficult; I'll explain this later.

5.) Head anatomy. Ok, first. She needs a chin. And chins aren't that pointy, no matter what Americanized manga tutorials say. (I really screwed myself over reading those in fifth grade.) It should be a bit rounder. And if you have a chin, that means the mouth will be slighter higher up. I won't critique the nose right now because that's pretty hard. Eyes should also be higher up, same with the nose. I also get the feeling the wings are hiding a sharp corner in the face outline. Don't do iiiiiiit. Human anatomy has no sharp corners. Lastly (before this becomes a wall of text), her hair looks tied back. That means we should definitely be able to see her ears. If there're sidebangs over her ears, they should surround the face and be visible.

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Ok, so with the separate points done...I said I'd get back to the hips. That issues relates directly to the problem with the shoulders and torso.

The shoulders look like they're sitting on her breasts. Like I said, they should slope down a bit. They also shouldn't be that far from the torso, but that's easily remedied by making the torso wider, as I mentioned. Should be at least the width of the head, but a bit thinner is fine for now. The chest area then wouldn't be much wider than the rest of the torso, or it'd seem strange. The hips are around shoulder-width, but for your style, make sure they're between torso- and shoulder-width. Elbows are at waist level, and the bone should be clearly set apart from the arm, jutting out and a bit sharp.

I think that's it for now; looking forward to your next drawing XD

>v> espy should crit my art too....

But yours is basically anatomically correct, Choco >.>