Is this Al right ?
 

does my avatar look alright or does the wings throw off ?
and if not should i add more white to it or is it OK just how its is ?

and i hope this its the requirement for this forum

I think the wings look odd with the cloak, there's no way it could physically hang that way with the wings in that position. Those wings seem kind of odd, just in general, given how low they're located on the back. From the shape of them, they seem like they should sprout from the shoulders.

I like the effect of the white eyeshadow on the black skin, though.

.The wings are good, I like the whole thing, I'm sort of into matching stuff really too much but I'd do something with thek outfit :O

It looks really good.

I guess the wings throw it off a little.. whats most important is if yo ulike it though.

I would definitely add a bit more white to the body-- Kei's white belt, axels belt, or even the tagger belt would do, I think.

The body of it just seems a bit too dark, you know?

I agree with Batty, something white on the torso would improve it by a lot.

Can I ask what item is in your hand?

that's a Fictasu in her hand.

It looks good to me, but we can't really judge your looks personally it's your opinion on your avatar that counts if we asked our trisphites how we look and see what can we change, we would all look primarily the same.

like a belt or corset?

Echo;; Yeah. I suggested maybe the Kei belts, or the Tagger one. Just a splash of white to offset all the black is in order. xD;

You're quite a bit dark..otherwise I'm probably not the best judge. I like all else. (:

Or those staff belts

The color of the hair throws it off for me. The wings are also a bit odd as well. What theme are you trying to go for?

Nothing's wrong with the wings in my opinion. However, if it were me, I'd add a little white in the middle. The black kinda overpowers and stands out more when both colors should stand out the same.

In truth though, if you like it than you should keep it.