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Horror Babe 11-25-2012 06:42 PM

Improve the avi Above You
 
This is NOT a game, so do not spam.

That being said, lets get on with what this thread is about, (im just gonna paste what the creator of this thread from another site said).

This is a re-make of a thread to suggest how you would improve the avatar above you, though it's basically a "What item would you add/remove" thread. Be sure to actually give helpful suggestions!

Posts like More items, not enough red, too much blue or I don't like this item are bullcrap. If you can't think of anything to improve, don't post.
Posts like "I wouldn't change anything" isn't improving the avatar, it's a compliment. If you really feel like you need to compliment them, comment their profiles.

Where there's nothing wrong with thinking that, I'm going to ask that you explain yourself here.
Give item suggestion of items you think should be added, or items that you think don't belong there. If you think there's too much red, explain why you think there is too much red there. What items are making the problem. If you think the avatar needs more of a certain color? Be sure to suggest what types of items and where. :3 This is helpful.

People come here for actual opinions.

Though if you feel that the avatar above you is extremely well done and needs no improvement? Feel free to express that!
But most of all... Have Fun!!!

TL;DR
Don't just post "Needs more blue." Say where you think it needs blue, and suggest items.

Arikana 11-25-2012 11:27 PM

I'll give this a whirl. owo

Overall, you've got a good colour matching thing going on. But something it needs is changing the orange shade of the arm warmers, hair bow, and fireworks to a shade that better matches the shade of the shattering ground and monarch sandals. :3

Perhaps try removing the suspenders and replace them with the 1k au belts (normal, bust, and waist ones) in the same colour. :3

Horror Babe 11-25-2012 11:40 PM

Your avi is complete sillyness.
XD
So i think you should add more sillyness, perhaps the confetti from last years birthday items?

Also, What shade of orange should i use?

Arikana 11-25-2012 11:49 PM

It's not that silly. I just got bored of my previous avatar (the one before the orange ramune bottle with black wings) and couldn't come up with a new one that quickly. So I just randomly threw on a Japan item which happened to be my ramune bottle. >w>

Uh, just play around till you get the same one as the shattering ground and monarch set orange? owo
*doesn't know which one that is* @_@

Ginger 11-26-2012 12:35 AM

Technically there are multiple shades of orange in the dress and sandals and I think the orange Titanic picked is suitable to match, however I think a lighter orange item should be layered over the top of the arm warmers to add as a highlight. Maybe an arm cuff or bracelet? c:

Horror Babe 11-26-2012 12:53 AM

Ooh, this is amazing.
Lovely avi.
Thought, the bright green eyes are distracting.
Perhaps a darker shade of green for the eyes would look better

Poggio 11-26-2012 04:20 AM

I would remove the firework from the back ground as it makes the avatar look off balance. If you are looking to add more orange to off set the greens then I would try small accessories and not something so big as a fire work. Either that or fill the empty space with a full background.

You could possibly try to overly more of the token raver items. I personally am not a fan of the large blocks of color, I prefer smoother gradients which is why I use little items to build up over items. It may not work for you

Horror Babe 11-26-2012 01:17 PM

The bow on the crotch is too dark.
Hmm.
Perhaps the sash/belt thing i have would work?
Not the color i have, but im sure theres a blue thatd work

Asami 11-26-2012 06:24 PM

Add a tad bit of teal to the feel maybe the teal sock? Idk maybe make one sock teal and the other green?
What's that black thing that goes across your torso? it kinda makes it look a bit weird.

Also try this to see if it looks cool layer under the tie but over the dress the black under thing that's in the twisted image item (the one I have equipted
the tie should hide the white on it : 3if it looks stupid don't do it

And maybe layer some teal on the arms as well

Poggio 11-26-2012 06:46 PM

I like Asami's avatar the way it is, I just do not understand why the sword.

Tiva 11-27-2012 03:28 PM

Change then antler colors, the dark green seems to come out of no where the black, blue (light or dark) silver or white would meld better or even the blonde color to blend with the hair.

I would also add a bit more to the feet the Fenrir's anklets would work or the foot wraps from Incogninja or KNK would work.

(My avi editor is being way slow atm)

Asami 11-29-2012 05:28 PM

You have tons of teal on top but none on the bottom. Maybe layer teal stockings under everything?
And add something gold on the top. Just something small that will help distribute it evenly. Maybe even the sparkles from the rave item would do?
Though I really adore the middle part with the sash and stuff. That's so cute

Sushi 01-02-2013 05:34 PM

Lovely avatar. Maybe... hmm.. get rid of the snow back ground so I can see the phoenix feathers better.

silverygit 01-03-2013 03:38 AM

O.O I have no idea how you could improve your lovely avatar, I am confused by the gigantic hat but all in all it just matches so well :)

Gaius 01-03-2013 12:06 PM

The wings are a really beautiful color. I'd love to see more of that on your avatar. Otherwise it's very nice.

Lauv Keiko 01-06-2013 09:05 PM

I believe it's already complete. Although, I'd say the groove box item seems to be off a little bit.

Gaius 01-11-2013 12:10 AM

Groove Box is off? Do you mean layers-wise or just like the item doesn't belong with the avi?

I like yours! The ninja theme is done really well. Maybe more of the aqua accents would look nice? You kind of just have some at the top and nothing past the waist.

Asami 01-11-2013 12:33 AM

I would try some type of eyebrow. It looks a little off without an eyebrow. The best one to go with that hairstyle is the dots in the kitsune item.

You need just a little bit of green in the center area to balance out the colors. (Ignore if you cant find anything perfect)

Do you have a requiem knight? It goes perfectly with the groove box item ^^

Idk if you actually need the rose id just keep the cards and no rose (unless there's a reason for the rose)

Overall its actually a really cool avvie :3 I love it

Gaius 01-11-2013 06:49 AM

I love Requiem Knight! Totally planning on buying one... eventually. And wow, I hadn't seen those eyebrows before. Wonder if Kitsune would be hard to get. I just didn't really love how any of the shop ones looked on it. :/ Maybe I should go back to aqua instead of green?

Your avatar seems a little too cluttered. The smooth texture of the background items versus the harsh textures formed by all your accessories is kind of unpleasant. The colors are nice though and the theme is well-executed!

SolaceXxX 01-14-2013 02:29 AM

I like your avatar a lot. I'm not sure about the items completely yet, so I don't really think anything needs to be fixed, added or taken off.

Honey 01-14-2013 01:41 PM

You've come to the site so recently that I wouldn't expect for you to have gathered much au or runes to buy things, so given the situation as being new to the site it is a fine avatar, but hopefully we can see more items and such in your next avatars. c:

Kit Katy 01-23-2013 03:54 PM

I'd probably add a bit more white around the chest or arm area. It's heavy on the purple, which isn't exactly a bad thing.

Natsunaine 01-23-2013 05:37 PM

It seems a little bland maybe, add items with more detail?

Kit Katy 01-23-2013 05:39 PM

Yeah, figured that would be said. I need more mula. xD

I don't really think I'd change your avi. Well, not majorly. The only thing I'd add is give the guy some eyebrows. It looks off without them. xD

Natsunaine 01-23-2013 07:50 PM

I would but the eyebrows gp to high to see lol

Kit Katy 01-24-2013 09:40 PM

Yeeeah, that is a problem. xD

Asami 01-27-2013 04:31 PM

Maybe add a belt to tie things together. Like maybe a black belt or something ^^

Its a rather interesting avatar I like it


(Im looking for lots of help with this avvie. So please suggest items and poses ect. X'D I cannot for the life of me figure out how to make her perfect)

Nightmare 01-28-2013 10:51 AM

Hmm, I think it's a great start.
The main thing I see is the lack of white/silver at the bottom.
And the arms seem to stand out, so maybe find something to cover
the arms (not the hands)?
Other then that, I think it's great.

Lauv Keiko 01-28-2013 01:18 PM

Nighty's avis are always cluterry but ALWAYS good.
Honest opinion though, I'm not really a fan of teal + violet
so, in order to "improve" it, so to speak, try using grey instead of black
or you can just leave the teal in the closet o3o
(you don't really have to do it though x3)

Nightmare 01-28-2013 02:23 PM

I was trying to use the RDI for this month. |D
In all honesty, I just started clicking things and adding them. xD

As for your avatar .. I feel it either needs more black on the rest
of the body, or more red on the feet. It's uneven. Other then that,
I love it. * U*

Kit Katy 01-28-2013 07:03 PM

There's so many things to look at, a bit too many things. I'd probably minimize the items a little. The color combination is rather cool though.

Natsunaine 01-28-2013 07:46 PM

Hmm the legs pop out fpr some reason maybe you need to add more purlple in other areas so it balances out

Asami 01-28-2013 07:55 PM

I like how it looks but the middle area is a little too cluttered. Its just a tad too bulkly.
The flames on the hands stand out a bit
andtheres lots of different shades of red/raspberry? Maybe take out one and balance all the others

The face is utterly terrifying tho x'D props on that.

Natsunaine 01-28-2013 08:29 PM

I was proud of my face xD

The gloves dont seem like they fit to me for some reason maybe its just me

Twigg 01-31-2013 09:11 PM

Firstly, your avatar is wonderfully terrifying, Natsu. <3

But I think if you added something in a little brighter red (like the color around your waist) up near the top of the head it would balance it out a little more. (:

Unfortunately, I have no item suggestions. >>
SORRY I'M BAD AT THIS. D:

Natsunaine 01-31-2013 10:13 PM

You are right actually i just couldnt find any good items that went well with it

Thank you fpr the compliment <3

Your avy is gorgeous though i feel a necklace or something around the neck thats small would make it perfect

Mal Kapwn 02-14-2013 03:34 PM

I think your avi looks great -- very well put together. If I had to suggest something, maybe a hair/head ornament or more things going on in the background.

Espy 02-14-2013 03:40 PM

Hm...The wrist area looks a tad bit plain. How's about black bracelets/something of that sort?

Lucid: 02-14-2013 04:40 PM

I don't know if you modeled the avatar after your drawing or if you drew it based on your avatar, but I think it looks great. They're different enough from each other but I can see the similarities especially in the head region. I think the eyeshadow on your avatar makes you look older and more world-wearied while the drawing looks much younger and brighter. I also think blue eyes would match the rest of the avatar, although the green eyes certainly pop if you're going more for a character than a matchy avatar. The feet look really bright compared to the darker torso/leg area.

Espy 02-14-2013 05:18 PM

The head area seems...really...tight/close-sticking compared to the rest of the avi. Maybe add horns or something?



No, the art was based partially off a previous avatar, actually. And yes, had some issues with the feet. Unfortunately, I couldn't find a good medium blue item for the torso/pants area.

I also completely forgot about the eyes. Oh well.


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