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Illusion's Entry - i<3U, Kamid
Illusion's Entry - i<3U, Kamid
*SYSTEM LOADING.... 100%!* In a sack of hay a man slowly moves out mechanical like and looks around. *OPERATIONAL* He begins to walk out of the shed he has been staying at for the night and drifts off. *FUEL SOURCE LOW* The man feels his stomach noticing a rumbling noise is being made. "That dam squishy Fakir!" The man said in a synthetic tone. "I'll get him for this." The man still walking begins to enter a suburbs of a town, its dark out. He stumbles across a "fleshy" women, dressed in black boots, and shiny elastic. She had long curly black hair, and her beauty level was perhaps.. "Over 9000" The man said. "Excuse me?" The lady said in a snappy tone. "Your beauty level is over 9000, but I'm still analyzing." *ANALYZE BEAUTY* "Oh you like what you see huh? Well your not bad looking yourself. Hi you can call me Carmel, and you?" *LOCATE MEMORY FILE... NAME..... KAMID.* "KAMID!" "Oh that's an interesting name... Say... You wanna play a game with me?" "Game?" "Yes game, don't worry it's a game neither of us lose." "This confuses me, how can there be a game in which we both win? Isn't that a contradiction?" "What?" Carmel is confused. "... You sound like a robot.." "Well I-...." Kamid was interrupted. "LETS. SHARE. CIRCUITRY!" Carmel said in a fake robotic tone. Kamid offended punches the lady with his muscular arm and she shoots into the sky where only a twinkle is left of her in the bright sky. "That virus! She wanted to infect me! But luckily I have this virus protection garmet!" Kamid snaps at his underwear waist band and continues walking. *THINKING* "Did that lady wanted affection in love? HA! I can't love!" There Kamid stood, eating his words he fell as if the affection he thought he would never feel or even existed fell toward this beautiful creature. It was small, but its pink fur and verbal capacity was incredible. There it stood saying.. "MMMMHMMMM!" Kamid notices the beauty was trapped in a force field, he analyzed the container. "TOYSRUS!" Kamid said in a grunting tone. *Loading... Advancing strength... * In a punch Kamid broke the door, he heard load sirens but he grabbed the beauty and ran. He ran until he heard no more then he asked the creature. "What is your ID small beauty." "I love you!" The pink furry beauty said. "Love?" Kamid realizing a strange feeling towards this i<3U was incredible. "Furby loves you." i<3U said. "What? Who is this Furby? I feel affection toward you! Your motorize processing, your sensors.. Its..." *LOCATE WORD.. ERROR! ERROR!* "Lovely.." "I love you!" "And I love you too i<3U..." |
Aaah.. I still notice the two grammatical mistakes I made... So hopefully no one notices xD
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I'll put mine over in the writer's forum since I like excuses to go there and see it more active. I can post a link for you here when it's up so people can follow it if they want to.
Mine feels so tiny now. |
Shoot, QMC, that's what I should have done. xD Oh well.
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You can always move it over there and use the above post to put a link.
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The one with Kyren in it was a favorite of mine.
But I can't say I'm not biased. That was a classic ending thou XD |
Congrats you three :3 I'll have to read them later when I have some time ;)
Edit: Illusion, yours was funny to read :3 Sage, I adored it! The ending made me giggle endlessly XD Quiet, I'll read yours when you put it up :p |
Mine is wee, so it certainly wont take long to read. I'll go put it up in the writers' forum now.
EDIT: here's the link. http://trisphee.com/forums/showthread.php?t=5348 |
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-is a grammar nazi- |
There are a few more than 2 there, Illusion, but I won't hold that against you ;).
I wish there were more to read. :). |
Lol, I forgot to put big in there.
I meant the 2 big grammar mistakes xD, I made a lot of grammar mistakes but I'm referring to the big ones. |
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